Sunday, September 11, 2011

Shout out aloud !!!


i had to tell the things , things that i cant tell
i kept repeating them in my minds
but loudly i cant yell

opening mouth will mean a lot
will mean to shatter world
i cannot let thoughts go
as they are like sharp swords

better i let my anger settle
let my feeling sit down
that i know what i am thinking is worthless
then just why listen to them now

thinking this i curbed words
i buried my feelings
but forgot they were still alive
no matter for how much time
i keep them in coffin

one day they will burst out
will fall like volcano
they will burn my world still
whether today or tomorrow

so why not just let them out
and reduce suffering a little
what has to be shattered
will shatter , will have to repair
whether today or tomorrow

2 comments:

Darril said...

Smriti.. This is an amazing peom.. with lot of truths..
'i buried my feelings
but forgot they were still alive
no matter for how much time
i keep them in coffin'

These are wonderful lines..

'so why not just let them out
and reduce suffering a little
what has to be shattered
will shatter , will have to repair
whether today or tomorrow'

And these too..
Yup.. keeping things buried/hidden will affect the self.. instead let them out. I have seen few of them who changes these angers/feelings, positively to constructive things..
Good.. Beautiful lines.. All must have gone through this experience..
Happy reading this.. Keep writing..

Kalyan said...

lovely lines...nicely crafted words!